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Re: Dreams
Hi! This poem is interesting in the fact that it made me think very vividly of colors as I read, which usually doesn't happen (the colors are just usually in ...
Jul 27, 2017 -
Re: Something I believe everyone should hear.
Hi! This is a very uplifting essay, especially for teenagers who feel as though their feelings are overlooked just because they're kids. You were able to use second person without ...
Jul 23, 2017 -
Re: stand still at the edge of the world
Hi! I'd just like to start off by saying that this poem is so relaxing to read. Especially since you don't really use full sentences throughout. I also just loved ...
Jul 23, 2017 -
Re: LIFE-full song
Hi! It's super cool that you're writing a song! I like the repetition of the "you've got to" and also the rhythm of the first stanza! (You wrote with three ...
Jul 22, 2017 -
Re: (so don't lose me, follow me home) : 4/4
Hi! (For the last time I guess. For now anyway.) I'm kind of sad (and mildly angry) that this story didn't have much closure, even though I totally expected it. ...
Jul 21, 2017 -
Re: (so don't lose me, follow me home) : 3/4
Hi again! I like the continuation of the "different person point of view" thing. I also noticed that throughout your whole series, everyone has been staring, thinking 'huh, I shouldn't ...
Jul 21, 2017 -
Re: (so don’t lose me, follow me home) : 2/4
Hi! So I read your first chapter and I was intrigued. I don't think this will be much of a review, but I'd just like to share my thoughts on ...
Jul 21, 2017 -
Re: Never Be Alone Chapter 1 (LGBT)
Hi! I'm glad you're writing a story with queer characters! We always need more of those. So what I liked was that you discuss certain issues in the queer community ...
Jul 20, 2017 -
Re: (so take a picture of the one you love and put it in a locket)
Hi! This was an interesting idea, and I think you executed it fairly well. I get exactly what you're talking about when you say "she's still here". That being said, ...
Jul 18, 2017 -
Re: Your Cat Doesn't Even Like You
Hi! This is going to be a pretty short review, because I honestly have so many mixed feelings on this piece. This story is well written, I'll give you that. ...
Jul 18, 2017 -
Re: Strength of a Writer
Hi! I honestly love the idea of comparing a writer to a warrior. (Like the pen is mightier than the sword). I also love your writing style. The poem was ...
Jul 18, 2017 -
Re: Lonely
Hi! This was an interesting essay which I related to a lot and which I'm sure many people on this site can relate to. In this review, I'll give you ...
Jul 16, 2017 -
Re: White Fire
Hi! I truly enjoyed this story and had a good laugh reading it. The main character's voice and descriptions are absolutely hilarious. It's hard to write comedy without the jokes ...
Jul 16, 2017 -
Re: Cornerstone
Hi! This is such a sweet poem, it's honestly so adorable. I can tell how much you love all these people! I like you you styled the "corner" of cornerstone. ...
Jul 14, 2017 -
Re: It's Weird
Hi! This poem tackled the subject of suicide in a professional and understandable way. There was nothing insensitive or offensive that I saw, which I hard to do. I also ...
Jul 14, 2017
