I love this, maybe I'm overly sensitive to poems like yours since I seriously considered taking my own life many times, but I guess that even if I haven't, I'd fall in love with your words. You don't use difficult or long ones but it sill sounds serious and mature, not simple at all.
It's so painfully true, how the world will spin and turn without us present in it, but that world will be free of our existence, which makes it different. The world becomes different for the people that loved us, it spins differently when we're gone.
I just want to say that I really like this and I hope your friend is feeling better.
Points: 56
Reviews: 9
Donate