michaeld

Ok. So first of all, I would just like to say that this was very sweet! I enjoyed reading it and I think that your friend is very happy for ...

I really liked this! Although some of the personification was a little bit disturbing... that could probably be because I take things literally while I'm reading it, and then go ...

I really enjoyed reading this! It was a simple easy read which is great for me! I found no grammatical mistakes and it flowed very well! I normally don't read ...

I really liked this! I don't know why, but I did xD I think that the shortness was what made it so powerful. But liked it; short, sweet, and to ...

This is truly a beautiful piece of work! I loved the repetition of: 'I sit silently, staring dumbly at the wall' That's what really caused a lot of the emotion. ...

Ok I'm so glad that this was pure fiction! If it wasn't, the person that you wrote about, better be scared :P So I didn't really find much fault with ...

This was really good! It was an easy read, it flowed very well, and there weren't very many grammatical mistakes if any! There is one thing though. I have to ...

This is just beautiful!! I almost cried at the end! The imagery is so amazing and I could really see you guys together! Also the dates in the big bold ...

Haha this was actually pretty funny! I expected it to be pretty lame as most 'social-mediafied' books are, but it wasn't! I congratulate you for that! The one thing that ...

This was amazingly and beautifully written! I loved how you described this world as not as something that's holding you back, but something that lets you experience it differently :) ...

I liked this but I have to say that I agree with Wranna. It was a bit confusing at the end when you switched persons on us. But other than ...

This was AMAZINGLY written! I can't believe you're only fifteen! I was a little confused because I thought that it was going to be the first chapter of a book, ...

I think this could get somewhere, it's just that it's not there yet. It felt a little bland and I think you should spice it up a bit. You should ...

I really enjoyed reading this! It was extremely well written! I was confused on whether Mimi was his sister, or the first girl he drove that wasn't his sister. You ...

Wow. This was actually really good! The symbolism completely blew me away! Wow. That's all I can say right now! And you're only fifteen? Great job! Keep writing! :P