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Re: A Plea to the Hated
Methrirr here to review your poem. I'm not sure what to think about this one. First things firs: *erie. Other than that, it has a voice, and a definite kind ...
Feb 6, 2014 -
Re: Network of Keys Chapter 6: Ky, First Floor/Level part 2
Methrirr, with your review. This is cool. I wish I'd read the first few chapters, because I'm horribly lost. Is Ky a bird? What's a Ponmik? So many things... Ah, ...
Nov 4, 2013 -
Re: Escape
Methrirr here with your review. MAIGAWD PAIGE. This is an amazing metaphor for what I think is drug abuse. I read it and wanted to keep reading it. I can ...
Nov 4, 2013 -
Re: Tapping Sounds and Strange Reading (3)
Methrirr with your review. I can see why few people tried to review this. It's very chaotic. You've mashed together so many ideas that I can barely tell what this ...
Nov 4, 2013 -
Re: Endings that Never End
Methrirr with your review. I won't lie, I like this. But there's not enough here! I wanna here more description, more structure, more of a story. I had a little ...
Nov 4, 2013 -
Re: Myself; Yourself
"Don’t try to understand this, You can try but you’ll never understand. Because I’m Myself; You’re Yourself. Don’t even try." BEST ENDING TO A CONFUSING POEM EVER. This is the ...
Jun 6, 2013 -
Re: Locked Up In This Cage Called My Life
Hai thar. I read this piece, and tried to sing it, and came to the conclusion that it is probably heavy metal because there is no melody that I can ...
Jun 6, 2013 -
Re: Doves of Forgotten Harmony
Methrirr with a review. Toe this poem was fantastic. It is my only hope that it isn't true. It tells a tale which is good, while still maintaining that purely ...
Apr 7, 2013 -
Re: Me: The Beginning
Methrirr is here, ready to review! I like this piece as a prose, despite it's grammatical errors (which I tend to ignore anyway, since I'm a critic, not an editor). ...
Apr 2, 2013 -
Re: Silence
I've got your review right here. I hope I don't mispel anything. This poem is very good. It has a good theme, and you portray it well. However, I'm not ...
Apr 1, 2013 -
Re: Weasel Away My Heart
Hello again, with your review. I liked this piece, and can't help but notice you're not using the word rent ;) But anyway, I liked your choice of words nonetheless, ...
Apr 1, 2013 -
Re: Feint (Part 1)
Methrirr with your review. I read this, and as I read immediately my mind flew to the pages of "Prey" by Michael Crichton. Rest assured that this is a complement. ...
Mar 31, 2013 -
Re: REM DEPRIVED: Blue Petals
Methrirr with your review. I read this, and in the beginning I had very low hopes. You have misspelled alot of things, such as Nonsense, and other things that I ...
Mar 31, 2013 -
Re: One Rainy Day
Well, I'm not all that sure what FLAMES are, but rest assured that you may find none here. I'm reviewing to help you our here, despite my lack of knowledge ...
Mar 31, 2013 -
Re: Knowledge Is Power
Hey Aley! I'ma make it my mission to get this out of the Green room with one of my never-grammar-oriented Reviews. First things first, I liked it. It was artistic ...
Mar 30, 2013
