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Hey... I'm going to completely botch a shortening of your name but I'll give it a shot... Fayman. I like that. :) Whoo! You got lots of reviews. I'll try ...

Hey Ash! I'm going to jump right in. I haven't read part one, so I may not understand what the faithful reader would. Every time Gales walked into his office ...

Hey Jalmoc! I'm going to jump in right with the critiques. Forgive me. I haven't read chapter 1, so I may be confused where a faithful reader would not. Micah ...

Hey there Cspr, This was from a while back, but I guess better late than never. I have to admit, I'm new to this poetry thing, but I'm going to ...

Hey Senza! So, I'm going to totally revive this piece you've probably forgotten about. I'm going to start with nitpicks because that's what I do. It's kinda joke that you ...

Hey Shady, Whoo! Review day! Blue is totally going to beast red! However, I'm not sure how many times I've told you this, but I really love Tasia. I find ...

Hey Birds! I find it hard to believe this poem has gone without another review for this long! You don't see tons of historical fiction on here, and definitely that ...

Hey Sonnet, This is the first review I've done that isn't prose! I'm not much of a poet, but I'm going to give this a shot. Your topic is very ...

Hey there Cowlogic! I know how the race is. You did pretty good for a rush. I envy you humorous writers. Humor is a gift I lack in the writing ...

Hey Sakura. I'm going to agree with John here. The problem with YWS is that your readers really only see one part at a time. You'll want to keep us ...

Wow RC, This was intense. You did a fantastic job. What a cool idea. For all of the fairly graphic parts, you do a pretty good job keeping it readable. ...

Hey there Purple, Here as requested! Welcome to YWS. I hope you'll enjoy it here. I found this very interesting. I love learning about different cultures, but the deaf community ...

Hey Calla, Very interesting title you've got there. I did it's job and pulled me in. First critique I've got: Paragraphs. Paragraphs give vital.organization to a piece. The general rule ...

Hey there Questio, I'm here as requested. I apologize for any repeats as I just skimmed over the other reviews. And don't worry! I'm not good at first person either. ...

Hey there Kakali, I said I'd get to this today, so I am, if it kills me... Hopefully it won't. I must say, as awful as it is, I'm slightly ...