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Hey there! Mcleo1 here for review day. It's time to get this poem out of the green room pompadour! :D Okay, sorry this just annoys me, but I really want ...

Hey, I'm here for a review. Happy review Day hyperview! I'd to say, overall this poem was really good. I really enjoyed it quite a lot. I really loved the ...

Hi there! Here's a review from mcleo1! This poem has been in the Green Room far to long. Lets change that now shall we! :D This poem was very, very ...

Heya, review here from Mcleo1. Happy Review Day from me. First off, I'd just like to say this is such a heartfelt poem and I'm really glad you shared it. ...

Hi there, it's mcleo1 here for a review :D Onto some mistakes, "Forgetting all about your worries and lies." This line isn't bad, but I suggest removing about because it ...

I have to say, that title really drew me in there. Well hi there, I'm going to review XD “Hey Yui, wake up” This first line, in the quotation marks. ...

Hi there :), I have to say I love your username it reminds me of Lilo and Stitch because of the numbers. Now to the Review: Criticisms: Alright, I really ...

Hi there, I'm here for a review :). Well the title, Kite flying, it just reminded me of the Kite Runner the book actually. Grammar: Alright, the capitalization is really ...

Hi there :) Well I didn't expect this at all. I can tell first off with the list that this connects to the previous chapters somehow. But I don't really ...

Hey there, nice to meet you :). I have to say this was different from the other pieces I've read. Actually reminded me of something I'd do, well the venting ...

Hi ya there! :) This is Mcleo1 for a review. Gotta say I love your username and this is so adorable. Now onto the review: This is a very short ...

Bullying essay for school I'm assuming? I had to do one of those before lol, Now onto the review. I'm assuming the (G) and the (H) and so on for ...

Well hello, review time :) Well this'll be a short review because it's a very short piece. At first I was assuming this was parental, motherly figure of some sort ...

Hi there :). Review time. Now I've got to say, I wasn't expecting this but it was so intriguing. Well first a little mistake, "how the weather's become unpredictable a ...

Complicated is a very relatable poem and I applaud you for that. You do not add any bells or whistles but go straight to the point with it. It's more ...