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Hi! Wowowow!! I really really liked this story. Reading the other review, I definitely agree with midnightdreary's point of view on how Jay makes them feel uncomfortable - but I ...

Hi! This story is really engaging and interesting, and hits the right balance of comedy and adventure in my opinion. I really liked the two main characters and how you ...

Hi Ava! You have a great story here but there are a couple things that caught my attention. I won't talk about any grammar stuff (I'm not confident enough in ...

Love love LOVE! I love it! I'm going to be completely honest here, when I saw that it was a parody of the titanic I thought oh please no - ...

Hi!! I hope you're doing well and having a great january (lol wait nobody is because back to school). I really like your poem - your language is amazing and ...

Hi!! I hope you're having a wonderful day :) I think it's great that you're free writing and even better that you're posting it and open to critique! I sorry ...

Hi!! OMG amazing description! I love your opening paragraph because it sets the scene beautifully but then makes a deeper connection the the character and what they're feeling. I think ...

Hi!! I love this story! So descriptive and powerful but yet really beautiful... This review will be pretty short because I honestly don't have a lot to say :) Beautiful ...

Hi! This is my first longer review so bear with me :) First of all I think you have a really good idea to start with and some really great ...

Oh. My. Goodness!! I love your rhyme scheme so much. I really like ABAB or similar types of rhyme schemes, although it is really tough to do without losing your ...

Hi! I love love loooove your last sentence. It's really powerful and yet left to interpretation which I think is a masterful skill as a writer. Actually, I just love ...

Hi! I really love your rhyming because it is very unconventional and shifts every stanza and line. I don't know if this is your intention, but if it is it's ...