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Wow, this is a really intriguing piece to read! The format is definitely unique compared to most of what I have personally read on here and in general, and the ...

Wow, I love this piece. It's an extremely bittersweet poem for me, in that I can definitely relate to mourning a lost friendship (especially one that was with a close ...

Wow, this is a really interesting short story! There's a lot of mystery to Mila's backstory, which I think would be lovely to read about if you decide to write ...

Thanks for letting me know that your second chapter was published! I liked how you went more in depth with Judy's backstory and gave each of the new neighbors' kids ...

Wow, this has to be the best short story I have read in a while. I absolutely loved this piece for multiple reasons, and it's really hard to find anything ...

Hello there! I noticed that this work has been in the Green Room for a while with only one review, so I figured I'd give it a read and review ...

Hello there! Welcome to YWS, by the way! I'll be doing a brief review of your first chapter so let's jump right in :) "Boys are stupid," Judy sneered delicately. ...

Hello there! I'm here for a brief review of your poem, which I found to be a really lovely piece and I am glad I had the opportunity to read ...

Hi there, what an interesting poem! I'm here for a brief review so let's jump right in :) I'd like to start off with what I did like - my ...

Hi there, I just want to start this review off by saying that I really loved this piece and I think that it's a great summary of what it feels ...

Hello! I'm here for a brief review of your poem. The first thing I noticed is that there is some inconsistency with the first lines of each stanza. You'll write ...

Hi there, I just want to start out by saying that I love this piece! It's something that I can definitely relate to, in a way, on a personal level; ...

Hi there! I really enjoyed reading your short story, I think that it is well written and there are definitely many parts that I feel that I can relate to. ...

Hi, new user here and this is my first review so please bear with me. Wow, I just want to start off by saying that I love this poem! This ...