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Thank you for your review. The experience happened a while ago, so the hurt isn't as bad now, but it took me a while to decide to put it into ...

Hi there, Wow, this is a great poem that describes the feelings of a person towards a loved one. It is simple, straight forward, and still incredibly well-written with great ...

Hi there, mb1221 is here to review this piece. As soon as I read the first two sentences, I got hooked to this piece. This is a very short, but ...

Thank you everyone for your reviews. To answer the question that many of you might be wondering, YES, it is true that I've experienced rejection countless times (haven't we all?), ...

I love this poem. It is very accurate and I am sure everyone can relate. I loved the way you used the "eyelids kissing each other" metaphors in the second ...

Thanks for the review. To be honest, I knew this wasn't the best way to end the piece with, but I couldn't come up with anything else. After all, I ...

Hi there, thanks for the review. I'd just to clarify a couple of things in the kindest way. :) Danny is the fictionalized character of myself; in other words, I ...

Hi there! I love haikus! Since I am terrible at poetry, I try to improve myself through haikus. :P Anyway, this one is just great! My assumption is that it ...

Hi there Great piece! Short, but really great. I liked the way you used imagery, such as "silvery powder" and "deafening drum rolls". They have given a lot of meaning ...

Thanks for your kind words. I tried my best in this piece to express my sorrowful feelings, but I also do know that some of the pains, like this one, ...

thanks a lot for the review... I just fixed the problems with "thee"s... :)

Thanks for your reply. I will try my best to make all your confusions clear. This poem is written from a guy's point of view. The guy is regretting for ...

Thanks for your reply on my first essay as a new member on the blog... And I hope you find the love with him as well. :)