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Hi, mb1221 is here to review this piece. First of all, the title is so catchy. But to be honest, when I read the poem, I was kinda disappointed, because ...

Hi, mb1221 is here to review this piece. First of all, I would like to say welcome to Young Writers Society. Hope you have a great time here. :) Good ...

Hi, mb1221 is here to review this piece. First of all, welcome to Young Writers Society. I would like to start this review by saying that this poem is an ...

Hi, mb1221 is here to review this piece. I am a huge fun of Harry Potter. I am obsessed with both the movies and the books. So, as soon as ...

I would like to say that this is an amazing short story. You have made all of your points clear, which is good. No cliches or complicated phrases. I didn't ...

Woww, this essay is perfect. You do a great job making connections with the reader; it's not easy to make the reader "find a part of themselves" in a written ...

Wow, this poem is so beautiful. The idea you are trying to convey within the poem is so clear, which is good. It makes it easier for reader to understand. ...

Hello there! This poem is awesome, I really like it. I loved the way you used metaphor in the first line "breeze gently caress my face" and personification in the ...

Hello there! Before I start, I would like to say that I really liked this story. There are two things I noticed, though... First of all, I found one spelling ...

Hello there! Before I start, I would like to say that I really liked this story. There are two things I noticed, though... First of all, I found one spelling ...

Hahahaha actually all the ideas you have come up are really cool, but not all of them describe me, to my surprise. :) For example, I would never wake up ...

Hi there! I really enjoyed reading it. Believe me, every line made me smile a lot. This is something that everyone would enjoy reading and writing about, which is awesome ...

This is really wonderful... :) I enjoyed reading it. I found no grammar or spelling errors which is good. Also, different than most others, you care about punctuation rules :)) ...

This is really wonderful... :) I enjoyed reading it. I found no grammar or spelling errors which is good. Also, different than most others, you care about punctuation rules :)) ...

Overall, I really liked your poem. The topic was really interesting and it exactly expressed my opinions and feelings about planes as well :D My advice for you about this ...