mawpah

Before I start my review I would just like to note that I am not familiar with the source material from which this was derived, so I read it as ...

Very well written story, it was easy to feel connected to the characters regret and revelations through the way you conveyed the emotion in the story. The power and emotion ...

I enjoyed this story, though I felt you tried to introduce too many things too quickly and it left me a little confused as to what was happening in the ...

What a great story. It instantly drew me in when I read the last line of the first paragraph. "I survived yes, but not a single other person in my ...

For being so short it was a great story. You managed to piece together a well done narrative in such limited space that you didn't need to expand upon it. ...

Wow, the beginning really pulls you in. The details within the scenario are great, I was able to picture the entire scene playing out in my head quite smoothly. Well, ...

This small portion of your story seems well written and it leaves me wanting more at the end. The dialog was realistic and well done as well. The characters thoughts ...

I did enjoy the characters inner narrative and how you described the their emotions. The one thing I noticed though was that it had a choppy transition from the 2nd ...

I really enjoyed this, it wasn't quite a short story and just short a poem. It had a great flow and really enlightened the reader into how the character was ...