manisha

hey! I really liked the story. I love the way you have described the protagonist's thoughts or feelings. It conveys the message clearly and I could almost feel his mental ...

you really really should re read it. There are just too many mistakes most of them typos. [Car] I get into the car and somthing made me look at the ...

hey nargles! I read your chapter 1 and got the flow of the story. I will review your chapter two as chapter one had got some really good reviews. I ...

hey! Starting off, I really do love the theme behind the poem. Time is one of my favorite topics and I really appreciate the way you have described time. The ...

hey! welcome to YWS. :) i loved your short story, you had a good flow working your way through the plot really well. I picked out some errors here and ...

hey! that was a definite horror story and your avatar really adds to the effect. I am reading this at 11 in the night and I dont think i am ...

hey! i really loved the whole theme of the poem and the way you brought out the emotion. I am not really good with poetry review but i think you ...

hey! it was a good read. i picked out some typos. i'll just point them out to you so it makes it easier for you to edit. " experiencign" this ...

hey! first of all, love the creativity! the children being named from A-Z, the missing a child, i really love that theme. its out of the box. maybe a little ...

hey! it was real good read. I'v read all the chapters you have written so far. A considerable improvement from the first chapter to this one. This goes for the ...

hi! it was a beautiful story. i enjoyed the read. the flow was good too! Hey! Wait up!" A voice, no, not just a voice. One similar to that of ...

hey! it was real touchy! i really think you have covered all the needed emotions in this short would make it even more beautiful if emotions are introduced more deeply. ...

hello! was a good read. as i am supposed to review it i'll just point out the faulty parts. in the start i was confused about the gender of the ...

talk about twisted creepy and dark all together you get this story! you did an amazing job of creepying me out! Trick question, Terry,” the man on his back huffed ...

wow! that was seriously dark and paranormal! I like the way paul's narration flows. it somehow added to the creepiness of the whole plot. when i started reading i didnt ...