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Hey there! Happy Review Day! I really enjoyed reading it. I must say that once I learned Fox and Eneta were lovers she was going to kill herself in the ...

Hey there! Happy Review Day. manisha here to review. Firstly I'm going to tell you how much I loved this story. You introduce a character, Tigress, into the scene projecting ...

Hi there! Happy Review Day. manisha here to review. Starting off I really enjoyed this. You worked on the idea of the world being mad really well. Seeing it being ...

Hey! Happy Review Day :) I see this is your first post, welcome to YWS! As you are writing this from the view point of a child it wouldn't be ...

Hi! Happy Review day!! Firstly this was a very strange story to read. I voice all the things Dutifulwriter has pointed out. Did you miss out on the punctuations on ...

Hi! Happy Review Day! I agree with niteowl, I too found it to be something of a personal entry. But that is fine, writing is writing as long as its ...

Hey there! I see this is your first post. Welcome to YWS! Happy Review Day! Firstly this was a great story. It was kind of predictable for me, I guessed ...

Hi fortis! I absolutely loved the story! Really, totally awesome! [quote] She’s a bird that has landed on a small twig that does not support its weight. The bird must ...

Hey there! I really liked your imagination here. The train concept and all. I didn't get it at first but I found it easier to understand later on. [quote]Cogs shoved ...

Hey there! Manisha here to review! Firstly, welcome to YWS! Alright, about the story now. I like the image you are trying to paint. Your description of the surrounding is ...

Hey! Welcome to YWS! I agree with the others. It does sound like a cliched movie. Recycledsoul has already pointed out the faulty grammar bits. But there is loads of ...

Heyya Dan! Welcome to YWS! So I'm reviewing after a really long time, bear with me kindly. :) I'll start of with how I felt about the story. I enjoyed ...

Heyya!! I really like this and sure going to see what you have in the next part. You seem to have not capitalized many of your Is. Maybe that is ...

hey Nina! Welcome to YWS and Happy review day! Be warned that I'm doing this review after a long long time and I might not be so apt or really ...

hey! I really liked the theme. Its put forward in a very simple yet strong way "Too many letters, (lts jst wrt n cnsnnts) " I really like these lines. ...