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Re: Misjudgment
Nice you put a lot of thought into your poetry :)
Jun 23, 2014 -
Re: Jealous Leaves of Ivy
Ever- Green as in jealousy. Pine as in 1. To feel a lingering, often nostalgic desire. 2. To wither or waste away from longing or grief: pined away and died. ...
Jul 1, 2013 -
Re: Cynic
Definitely not a stereotype. This guy was based on a real person, a guy who smokes and drinks to seem edgy, but in reality is depressing because of his jaded ...
Jul 1, 2013 -
Re: Jealous Leaves of Ivy
Ever- Green as in jealousy. Pine as in 1. To feel a lingering, often nostalgic desire. 2. To wither or waste away from longing or grief: pined away and died. ...
Jun 10, 2013 -
Re: Flickering Like an Angry Old Flame
Yes, I changed it so the rhythm would work and then the rhyme didn't anymore. No wI have changed it again so hopefully they both work. Thank you for your ...
Jun 5, 2013 -
Re: Cynic
Oh I thought that when you start a new paragraph you did have to start quotations again. My bad. Thanks for the advice.
Jun 2, 2013 -
Re: Flickering Like an Angry Old Flame
Thanks I will change that, yeah its about an x trying to get me back, if that makes more sense to you.
May 28, 2013 -
Re: Flickering Like an Angry Old Flame
In poetry its called a stanza, in songs a verse
May 27, 2013 -
Re: Aesthetically Challenged
I don't really know the person. I guess I just needed to give someone sympathy, a girl who wants people to know there is more to her than what is ...
May 27, 2013 -
Re: The Politics of Romance
I was trying to continue the theme of "right" - communism vs "left" fascism. So that's why i wrote : You're "right" to be a communist and say we should ...
May 26, 2013 -
Re: Soulstones
When you're a kid you don't really question why the world exists, this tree falls in a forest thing, you just play in it as it is without trying to ...
May 21, 2013 -
Re: Soulstones
When you're a kid you don't really question why the world exists, this tree falls in a forest thing, you just play in it as it is without trying to ...
May 21, 2013 -
Re: Time is running out.
I know its one word, I used it in the first paragraph and I wanted to mirror it with the other use in the second stanza to draw attention to ...
May 21, 2013 -
Re: Virgin Isles
Well generally the poem is alluding to sex, so I don't know if your familiar with it, but I think you can imagine. Shock waves, inward, spreading, deepening, as they ...
Apr 4, 2013 -
Re: Love Limbo
Perhaps with the part of neither greed nor vanity I was just trying to convey that their love is pure and honest, not a mask for other things. Thank you ...
Mar 31, 2013