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lyssiekins

  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: Smoke Ghosts

    Wow, your review was a complete and accurate analysis of that relationship and my emotions. I write as a therapy to work through them but those who read them exactly ...

    Aug 16, 2023
  • Poetry » Health, General Re: Days of yesteryear

    You are amazing! I admire your ability to write poetry in a second language. Keep up the great work.

    Aug 14, 2023
  • Poetry » Narrative, Science Re: De-Evolution

    What you mean to say is you don't understand evolution. You can choose not to believe in the sun too, but it exists anyways.

    Jul 14, 2023
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Realistic Re: (N)Ever

    May 16, 2023
  • Poetry » Realistic, Horror Re: the yearly rush

    The poem is definitely telling us how strongly you feel about your gender expression. To go from the first stanza of "little white dresses, tiny little shoes" to fabric stretched ...

    May 16, 2023
  • Poetry » Realistic, Horror Re: the yearly rush

    The poem is definitely telling us how strongly you feel about your gender expression. To go from the first stanza of "little white dresses, tiny little shoes" to fabric stretched ...

    May 16, 2023
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Dust Demons and Stars

    Like all the stars in the sky that may have died yet still leave their light for us to see, your wonderful poetry will live and be a testament to ...

    Dec 11, 2017
  • Poetry » Culture, General Re: Baby

    Hi thanks for your review, I realize it is a traditional thing, but I don't capitalize unless it is starting a new sentence. Secondly my computer kept auto correcting worshipped ...

    Aug 2, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Health, Other Re: no

    This article makes me want to swap gender fluids with someone.

    Aug 2, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: Sax and Violins

    Because its a play on words and relates to instruments and symphonies.

    Aug 2, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: Sax and Violins

    Lol its a play on sex and violence. Sax, because at the end the part with the symphony and all the other instruments silent as these two violins fight it ...

    Aug 1, 2014
  • Poetry » Culture, Other Re: Body Image

    Yes its weird how we end up hating ourselves instead of the status quo. Like we feel we are to blame for not being up to societies standards rather than ...

    Jul 8, 2014
  • Article / Essay » General, Supernatural Re: Essay 1

    Windsailor, don't you think that's a bit absurd? There was a time when books like the bible did not exist. In those times the idea of a God was made ...

    Jul 7, 2014
  • Poetry » Politics, Culture Re: Capitalism Bites

    I think based on your description of the lone wolf this works even better, because what I was really trying to draw attention to was how so many people are ...

    Jul 4, 2014
  • Poetry » Health, Dramatic Re: Dementia

    Thanks so much. I did mean binded, as another past tense version of bind, instead of bound you see. It's kind of not a word but I am using my ...

    Jun 28, 2014


"The trouble with Borrowing another mind was, you always felt out of place when you got back to your own body, and Granny was the first person ever to read the mind of a building. Now she was feeling big and gritty and full of passages. 'Are you all right?' Granny nodded, and opened her windows. She extended her east and west wings and tried to concentrate on the tiny cup held in her pillars."
— Terry Pratchett, Discworld: Equal Rites