lulu_lizzrd

i think you need to be a little bit more optimistic lulu

thats really simple lulu

the first and last line of the 1 par is too repetitive lulu

this is rather sad and depressive but no fear opptimistic women is here lol but its rather good, it describes how a lot of people feel lulu

a deer so snowy white...

ummm thats very simple lulu

ummm how do flowers 'flow' lulu

weel to be a bit honest, it sounds like you're writting a story just a a strange format lulu

ok so far i have liked all your work! your funny and extreamly original! its good to see something new! lulu ps hope to see more!!!!!

umm its interesting, i dont exactly see the connection but oh well lulu

wow, i dont think ive ever laughed that hard! if i could but this from you i would! you are a miniature Shel Silverstine! exelent job! lulu

it's rather funny because you pretty much described me and every other kid, teenager, and person, to an exact piont. I think this was exalently written lulu

wow, i really really like this one it actually sits perfectly in your mouth when spoken, it's exreamly good! lulu

this poem really shows how the person cares for the other, and how they trust them and what not lulu

i like this you really show the emotion lulu