lukekazey

Thanks for your review!

Thank you! tbh, this is my first piece of more slam-type poetry so Im glad you enjoyed, and I'm glad it brought your attention to the AIDS epidemic because thats ...

Thank you so much!! This is exactly what I needed, someone to rip this apart. I wrote this about a month after a breakup so I was feeling a lot ...

Thank you so much, I'll definitely take all your critique into consideration. In terms of foetus vs fetus, its just UK vs US spelling ahah

Definitely, I'm more than happy to do that. I'm a little busy at the moment so it may not be for a while but I'll definitely get to reviewing them. ...

Thank you. I hear all your suggestions, but for me the more imagery-filled route wasnt where i wanted to take this poem. I wanted to display the beautiful simplicity of ...

Thank you so much for your review! I wrote this poem sat in the shadow of York Cathedral, while on a break with my friends. It's very much personal and ...

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Loving the fact that feminist poetry is having a moment right now!

Loving the fact that feminist poetry is having a moment right now!

Thank you!

Things like %u201Cit%u2019s just a phrase%u201D are mainly said by religious families, so i guess it%u2019s mainly just in that situation that you%u2019d experience being told that. But yes, people ...

Thank you! and no, there was no personal significance, this is just what fit the brief of the assignment my teacher gave ahah

Thank you! I typed this pretty quickly on my phone, so autocorrect did a trrrible job. I shouldve done a proper proofread. Im gonna make those changes now though.

Ah, thanks for highlighting that. It%u2019s supposed to be %u201Cen masse,%u201D so I%u2019ll go revise that. Thanks!