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Really good! I can't review at the moment, I promise i will eventually, but I really liked it! At first I thought it would be another supernatural cheesy romance, but ...

Nice poem Alex! It's pretty good. Fame and fortune All belong to you, When one stares blankly At the skies Or perhaps bravery Beyond compare Or a hero that never ...

Well.. Since I can't be your friend while reviewing, I am going to be honest :wink: Life is there. Death lurks everywhere. A silent assassin waiting on Satins mark. First ...

Uh.. I could not even imagine writing that, or going through that :cry: Abuse confessionals always make guys feel like it is their fault.. Like it's something against guys.

Decent. It's short and sweet. We crave, we want, we think we need. A hollow through my lips we feed. Probably the best stanza. I has a nice crisp rhyme, ...

This is going to be fowarded to some of the girls in my school.. :twisted: Do you mind :?:

Good! I really liked this piece, and you can tell a lot of effort went into it. I liked the idea of looking into what the eagle thinks, that isn't ...

Good poem as to the actual mechanics, you painted a picture, and used good words. However, the problem i have with this poem, is that there is no background. Say ...

Great! It was funny great rhyme's, and finally a poem that isnt depressing! I especially liked the part about bringing Ol' Lucky to the father in law :lol:

Ok, i have two problems with this. First off, this poem has nothing to with Nazi's/ Holocausts. Just for history check, they did not work things like that. Re title ...

Ok, i can see that you were going for the little "ditty" effect. The problem is, is that if you're going for that, it needs to rhyme. The brevity of ...

My first suggestion would be to fix your spelling/punctuation mistakes. There are a lot. On to the story, the actual setting and story was good, and i liked your ending. ...

I believe that the weed is a drug allusion, i thought that was very good. I also thought that your move to less rhythmic writing, and more free hand was ...