lucyy

I noticed you posted a new chapter, which I can't wait to read so off I go ... Erm, well, daytripper, you seem to have posted the same chapter twice!! ...

I can't begin to tell you how bad I feel for being this late to R&R your work, school's just been so manic. But, I have made sure I had ...

Wow, wizzy, this was an amazing improvement!! *gold star* I'm glad you found my review helpful, and please do PM me if you decide to continue this - I will ...

Hi there Sky (do you mind if I call you that?) here I am for the promised review, which I hope is very helpful to you!! I think that's all, ...

Heyy there kissthewitch (do you mind if I call you wizzy? =P), I am here for the review you requested, and I hope it's helpful to you =D Everything Sparkles ...

I can't apologise enough for how late this is - I can't begin to tell you how bad I feel, but I am here and I am ready to review!! ...

Note to lucyy: read this!! Sorry that this is taking so long Teddy, but I promise you I will read and review this!! I promise I will review this as ...

I have just read another awesome chapter, ash - I loved it!! However, I did spot a few things ... Standing to my feet, I knew I Habving 'standing' there ...

Oooooh ... A great starting chapter ashley, and I can't wait for more!! You're such an awesome writer you know, I'm envious of you're writing ability *grr* :wink: hehe :D ...

Here I am for the promised review, sorry it's a bit late (school - enough said :p ) and I hope it helps you out! That's all I can think ...

Wohoo *bobs up and down* yipee to another chapter :D Let's read it ... Wow, another great chapter and a brilliant ending! I can't wait for more, you little teaser ...

Hm, what did you end it there for?? Post more SOOON, please :roll: I only picked up two spelling mistakes: pasta. I new it knew with me for quiet some ...

Ooh, great way to end - on a real note of suspense. Loved it!! However, I found a few mistakes: with magazines, cds, CD's her computers at and computer's her ...

The only thing I have to say about this is to be careful with your speech, as it can get confusing as to who's saying what, because of your (unique ...

Another great part .. I'm really enjoying this!! And the way you've laid out all of your story parts, it makes me go 'oh' in dissapointment, as I don't want ...