Until The End-Part 3

by Merry_Haven

Published October 23, 2008

~Hey, everyone. Here's part 3. Enjoy.~

Part 3

The Knock

Hearing someone knocking at the front door,

I meet Grandma Essie who is talking to a

girl around my age. Her chestnut colored hair with

tints of blond, sticks out at different ends, showing her

funky style of hair. The taste of fashion shows that she likes

black and white polka dots. A lot.

She sees me staring at her and raises a dark brow

while her pink lips curve up in a excited smile.

“Hey, you must be Essie's granddaughter.”

Grandma must of told her that I was coming.

“Yeah. I'm Hailey.”

“Cool. I'm Harper.”

So the name's Harper. “Why don't you girls go

to the park.” Grandma mentions.

“Sure. Come on, Hailey. It's down the street.”

“Okay.” I smile as Hailey leads me out of the house.

The Park

The place doesn't have much, but it does show

a bridge, so the water from the rain can go underneath.

On other ends of the bridge there are flower bunches

full of white daffodils. “The elderly folks around here

try to keep this place up and going.” Harper tells me

as we walk onto the little bridge.

“I remember going here after it rained and watched

the ducks swim by.”

“Ducks?” She looked at my questionable face and

laughed. “What?”

“Yeah, they somehow got here and swam all day.”

“Oh.” I couldn't tell if she was being sarcastic or

funny.

Eventually after time talking about our

childhood memories. Harper invited me to her

house. “Sure.” As I replied, she lead the way back.

Maybe living with Grandma Essie won't be

bad after all.

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lucyy
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lucyy wrote a review Review · Oct 30, 2008

Another great part .. I'm really enjoying this!! And the way you've laid out all of your story parts, it makes me go 'oh' in dissapointment, as I don't want it to end there!! I have to keep my patience in check to make sure I reveiew each of these parts as I just want to keep on reading!! Awesome stuff Merry & off I go to part four ...

--Lucyy xx

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ashleylee
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ashleylee wrote a review Review · Oct 26, 2008

Yes, for sure now I see that she is living with her Grandma from now on. :wink: It took me a couple of chapters, but I got it hehe

Umm, just thought I point out that you confuse Harper with Haily and vis versa up there so just be careful with that. Also, the conversation with ducks was sort of confusing. Just be clear with what they are saying :wink:

Otherwise, another wonderful read.

PM me when you post more, Merry! :D



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