lovelysayshi

Thank you tons!

Thank you so much, you're a darling.

The end is a letter, and letters are written in paragraph form.

The end of the poem is a letter. It's supposed to be in paragraph form...like a letter...but anyway, thanks for the review.

To be honest I just created the lines how I felt they should be, there wasn't really any formula to it so that's probably why the rhythm was a little ...

Yessss the endings are always the most important part to me. Thank you so much.

Aah! Thanks so much, you are a beautiful soul.

Thank you so much. I'm glad you got the same vibe that I created in the poem myself.

That was really clever.

I feel obliged to offer you cookies. I am so broken by your words.

Oh my goodness. Your words are electric, and how old are you? Thirteen?! You got me feelin' some typa way about your poetry, man. For real though, keep at it. ...

I think this is my favorite piece of work on the entire website.

I was hooked from the first line...just thought you should know.

Okay, can I just say.... WOW!?!? :) Fantastic.

Thanks so much! I think that it's a little unique to write a sonnet about something other than being helplessly in love with someone, it seems as if you are ...