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  • Short Story » Satire, Fantasy Re: Snow is Not White Part 1 : Cackle Me to My Doom.

    I like how you made a different version of Snow White (I love the title). I'm sort of making my own spin off of Beauty and the Beast, and you ...

    Jan 22
  • Poetry » Health, Realistic Re: Sticks and Stones

    Let me just say first and foremost, that I like how you based your entire line on the phrase, ''sticks and stones may break my bones, but words can never ...

    Jan 21
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: all the golden light that surrounds us

    Let me just say: Love hurts. Whether your not in love or if you are in love, it hurts, and its hard. You're not in a relationship; you probably just ...

    Jan 16
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: The wedding of Andrea and Carter

    I barely know much about this story, I just clicked on it. The short description for it though really drew me in. Imagine your best friend, or someone you're close ...

    Jan 16
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Soaked in Tea-Filled Thoughts

    This is so beautiful. The way this poem just flowed so smoothly, without anything intense. I love that. And the rhyming is chef's kiss. I personally am not a good ...

    Jan 14
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Supernatural Re: That’s IT?!

    As I began reading this piece of fanfiction, I came to realize that LJ isn't really much of a bad guy. He wants this little girl to get away from ...

    Jan 13
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Culture Re: غزل شماره ۱

    I did use Microsoft Copilot so I could translate your poem and leave a review. As I started translating it, I have to say I really liked it. I like ...

    Jan 13
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Supernatural Re: A secret between us

    Me personally, Nina is not my favorite creepypasta. I don't even know if she is a real creepypasta. She just sounds like to me a delusional creepypasta fangirl, much like ...

    Jan 12
  • Other » Fanfiction, Supernatural Re: Strangeface Lovelace, your nails are so long and pretty!

    Okay so I just read your comment at the bottom of this poem, and it said that this girl named Janice is the daughter of laughing Jack and Jeff the ...

    Jan 8
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: Paper Straw

    This poem really resonated with me the most. Sometimes I think that if I get into a accident or something, or don't show up to school for a period of ...

    Jan 8
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: He doesn't call anymore

    Such a beautiful poem. And I mean beautiful. There were just so many things that I loved about it. I feel like parents, they worry too much about us, but ...

    Jan 7
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Internal Storms

    I feel like this poem is definitely relatable considering the fact that many of us have our own internal battles inside ourselves. And the ones you are talking about particularly ...

    Jan 7
  • Poetry » Literature, Lyrical Re: free, freed

    This is a really beautiful poem. When I first read it, about being freed, I thought about the slave trade, and other events in history. I think the overall moral ...

    Jan 7
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Surrender

    I really liked this poem, and the title especially brought me in. When someone commits suicide, it's like they are giving up on everything, hence the word surrender. ''My favourite ...

    Jan 2
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Horror Re: The end is near…

    This was so funny and thank you for tagging me it! Let me just jump straight into the review! ''Mariah is hovering above me, a red lipstick smile on her ...

    Dec 26, 2025


“A good book isn't written, it's rewritten.”
— Phyllis A. Whitney, Guide to Fiction Writing