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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Twinkie

    Don't think I'm stupid, but I actually thought you were talking about the food Twinkies in your poem based on the short description. I was surprised when it was really ...

    May 12
  • Poetry » General, General Re: the rise and fall of a fish returning to sea

    I don't really like fish (not to eat but some fish look very pretty) and I hate being in like open bodies of water. Pools, I can deal with but ...

    May 12
  • Poetry » Fanfiction, Other Re: I hate my friend

    Sometimes having a best friend, who has all these good qualities, whose perfect in every way, shape, and form, can be exhausting and is literally kind of creepy. I mean, ...

    May 8
  • Poetry » General, General Re: wolf

    This poem is so simple, yet so complex. It can represent anything, but in my opinion, it represents fake friendships or fake relationships. Let me show you what I mean ...

    May 7
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Out of all the Stars, You.

    OMG I THINK I JUST WROTE A SIMILLAR POEM! Only instead it's called, A Sky Full of Stars. Great minds think alike, don't they? The first part of your poem ...

    Apr 29
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Why do you exist?

    Okay this was actually pretty funny. I do not like roaches as well because well, their roaches and their disgusting. I mean I love learning about animals and stuff like ...

    Apr 29
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: dear moon..

    This is such a beautiful poem. Sometimes I do find myself wondering, 'Does the moon ever get jealous of the sun?' Maybe it does, and maybe it doesn't. But in ...

    Mar 18
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: Blue Hour

    I'm not really a morning person, but I can definitely relate to what you are saying in your poem. Theres just something about waking up to a sunrise (when I'm ...

    Mar 6
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Stand

    This poem is just so powerful and uplifting, I just can't. This raised my self-confidence today. ''The turgid leaf withstands the rain, I sing out my heartache to release my ...

    Mar 6
  • Short Story » Literature, General Re: Cold Weather, Hot Chocolate

    Excuse me for not reviewing this work earlier. I was working on a few poems myself, but I promised myself that I would look into this short story of yours ...

    Mar 5
  • Poetry » Humor, Satire Re: I Swear I’m Straight! (PrideMonth Poem)

    This poem left me giggling in my knickers. It is almost pride month (is it in June or July, I always get confused) and this is the perfect poem to ...

    Mar 3
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Supernatural Re: The monster within | Chapter One |

    Hi CREEPER! Continuing on with this series (by the way I love how short and simple this series is, it makes it easier for me to keep up). ''It’s weird ...

    Feb 22
  • Poetry » Realistic, Politics Re: ȶɦɛ Щօʀʟɖ Ɨֆ Ɨռ Ֆɦǟʍɮʟɛֆ

    Hello Cats! lovelydove here to review such a lovely poem of yours on this fine day. I just want to say, I love when writers such as yourself write about ...

    Feb 22
  • Poetry » Realistic, Spiritual Re: hinterland

    I am a very big reader of the Bible, and your poem really stuck out to me. ''the one lifted from the river lies, tells the faithful that in canaan ...

    Feb 22
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Supernatural Re: The monster within | Introduction |

    I'm so excited to read the other chapters related to this introduction Creeper! First off, I have to say that Luke might be one of my favorite characters, so far ...

    Feb 18


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