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Re: Twinkie
Don't think I'm stupid, but I actually thought you were talking about the food Twinkies in your poem based on the short description. I was surprised when it was really ...
May 12 -
Re: the rise and fall of a fish returning to sea
I don't really like fish (not to eat but some fish look very pretty) and I hate being in like open bodies of water. Pools, I can deal with but ...
May 12 -
Re: I hate my friend
Sometimes having a best friend, who has all these good qualities, whose perfect in every way, shape, and form, can be exhausting and is literally kind of creepy. I mean, ...
May 8 -
Re: wolf
This poem is so simple, yet so complex. It can represent anything, but in my opinion, it represents fake friendships or fake relationships. Let me show you what I mean ...
May 7 -
Re: Out of all the Stars, You.
OMG I THINK I JUST WROTE A SIMILLAR POEM! Only instead it's called, A Sky Full of Stars. Great minds think alike, don't they? The first part of your poem ...
Apr 29 -
Re: Why do you exist?
Okay this was actually pretty funny. I do not like roaches as well because well, their roaches and their disgusting. I mean I love learning about animals and stuff like ...
Apr 29 -
Re: dear moon..
This is such a beautiful poem. Sometimes I do find myself wondering, 'Does the moon ever get jealous of the sun?' Maybe it does, and maybe it doesn't. But in ...
Mar 18 -
Re: Blue Hour
I'm not really a morning person, but I can definitely relate to what you are saying in your poem. Theres just something about waking up to a sunrise (when I'm ...
Mar 6 -
Re: Stand
This poem is just so powerful and uplifting, I just can't. This raised my self-confidence today. ''The turgid leaf withstands the rain, I sing out my heartache to release my ...
Mar 6 -
Re: Cold Weather, Hot Chocolate
Excuse me for not reviewing this work earlier. I was working on a few poems myself, but I promised myself that I would look into this short story of yours ...
Mar 5 -
Re: I Swear I’m Straight! (PrideMonth Poem)
This poem left me giggling in my knickers. It is almost pride month (is it in June or July, I always get confused) and this is the perfect poem to ...
Mar 3 -
Re: The monster within | Chapter One |
Hi CREEPER! Continuing on with this series (by the way I love how short and simple this series is, it makes it easier for me to keep up). ''It’s weird ...
Feb 22 -
Re: ȶɦɛ Щօʀʟɖ Ɨֆ Ɨռ Ֆɦǟʍɮʟɛֆ
Hello Cats! lovelydove here to review such a lovely poem of yours on this fine day. I just want to say, I love when writers such as yourself write about ...
Feb 22 -
Re: hinterland
I am a very big reader of the Bible, and your poem really stuck out to me. ''the one lifted from the river lies, tells the faithful that in canaan ...
Feb 22 -
Re: The monster within | Introduction |
I'm so excited to read the other chapters related to this introduction Creeper! First off, I have to say that Luke might be one of my favorite characters, so far ...
Feb 18
