lostthought

I am trying not to cry. How dare you write such a splendid poem! :3 Well I am here to review, after I go dry my tears. Back! I'm better ...

How you fit that much about a swing I will never know. Well, hi I am here to review! Well with my reviewer's mask on I can say that I ...

Hi, I am here to review your work! The person below me almost covered everything but there were some small spots he/she left bare. ~ We’re going to see how ...

......................................................................That..was..amazing. (Notice I was wordless for a long time) Well I am here to review your poem. Btw, Welcome to YWS! It is nice to

I am laughing my head off. I am here to review your highly humorous poem. I even have a favorite line! 'I chew up and swallow the stringy tail' I ...

Hi there! I am to review. Not that you smell or anything but lets say the green room is a gym and the stories are sweaty athletics in desperate need ...

Hey! Since you are still sorta new and I haven't greeted you yet, Welcome to YWS! I know, I know, you might be protesting you aren't such a newbie anymore ...

Hello there SARAH! Welcome to YWS! I am here to review. Also if you have trouble with reviews yourself just ask one of those people who are special colored. I ...

I am here to respond to your review request. Curiously enough I have never read anything of yours. I don't know if you usually write like this so correct me ...

Hey there! Here to respond to your review request. Sorry it took so long. No internet can do a lot to a person. Since this is a poem I review ...

Hi, here to review since I have already read your other pieces! Gold already took most of what I was going to say. Still I would like to acknowledge those ...

Okay then...... Well I am here to review your wonderfully disturbing piece. This is a piece where you read, sit there, and wonder what the heck just died in your ...

Is this gong to be continued? You can make it a story about a young girl and her brother who have to suffer the abuse of their dad. Punctuation- there ...

Hello! Here to review. I like this poem. Good job on it. It is very well written and grammatically correct. It flows really well and has a good rhythm to ...

I like it a lot. The thing is that there is no rhythm. Like songs, poems should have a rhythm. I do have a favorite stanza though. "Believing none would ...