lordgluzman

Hey I really liked this song but in order to make it very emotional or sad you need to add some more blood to it, for example: The loser cries--------Maybe ...

This song was okay. But I think you used the word cell to much, so in time it pretty much got boring. I think you also don't have to write ...

To tell you the truth I really liked the descriptions and I thought this is a good lyric, but I did not get what you were singing about to be ...

IT IS TOO SHORT FOR ME. YOU NEED TO MAKE IT LONGER AND MAKE A POINT OF A POEM, THERE IS NO POINT. YOU ARE JUST TELLING ABOUT FIRE FIGHTING ...

I WOULD GIVE YOU 5 OUT OF 5 STARS FOR THIS. REALLY I WOULD, I AM USUALLY HARD ON LYRICS, BUT YOU WERE GREAT! I LIKE THE THEME, IDEA, DESCRIPTION, ...

TO BE HONEST I DID NOT REALLY GET ANYTHING AWESOME FROM YOUR LYRIC. IT WAS TOO SHORT, AND THE THEME IS THE SAME ALL THE TIME. THE THEME THAT YOU ...

Thanks, you did actually teach me something, problem is I live in Finland and you live in USA. I remmeber my the times when I lived in Atlanta, Georgia, those ...

DUDE, YOU DONT HAVE TO WRITE IF SOMETHING IS A VERSE OR NOT. WE CAN FIGUER THAT OUT BY OUERSELVES. I ALSO CAN SEE THAT THIS IS ROCK, SO I ...

That was very good! I am really happy to see you in this forum (: But I think you don't need to write if something is chorus or not because ...

hmmm.... I say it was really good! especially if you would turn this into a lyric and have some melody for it. I liked the emotions and the theme of ...

Rock? It better be rock! This song brought so much emotions of sadness and darkness. That's why I liked it! Also your rhyming was really good. The only thing what ...

You have a really good mined! This script was funny. smart, and interesting The best part was Tom: Nothing incredibly elegant. Nothing fancy. I was going to take her out ...

This was pretty nice romantic song. To be honest I am not good at critting super romantic songs. I like to critt heavy and hard lyrics. But their were romantic ...

*Applause* Great job this now one of the best lyrics I ever read on this forum. It was beautiful. You brought emotions such as pain, sadness, and of course love! ...

It is a pretty nice song but I think it is too short. Maybe you need to write a little more about the romance and describe about why and where ...