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hey Knight, so, first off, I'm really sorry that happened, doing something you regret sucks, especially with consequences, and I hope everything works out (If you want to talk about ...

I really love your creativity. I was honestly expecting a stereotypical woe-is-me poem (not that I'm making light of body image issues, I've struggled with them myself and know its ...

This is a very artistic piece, although I wouldn't exactly call it a poem, more of a creative prose. I like how you relate the pictures on the wall, and ...

Live here for your review! honestly, the first thing to come to mind when I read this is wow. I almost cried reading this. I'm not sure if you have ...

I'm truly impressed by this piece. the imagery you use to describe the world is truly breathtaking. I would love to see what happens when you try to add in ...

Hey WiteOak! This is a really awesome poem. I loved the description you put into your work. I can imagine the struggle and fight behind it. The only thing I ...

I really love the form for these poems. They are short, and to the point. I'd love to see you experiment further with poems like this, only maybe using more ...

Hey CHuck! this is a very interesting poem, and I've enjoyed reading it. I love your choice of style in just having a few words on each line. It was ...

I love how this poem takes a different spin on the idea of being deaf. I think that your outlook on it is wonderful and it is great that you ...

this is a really interesting piece and I absolutely love the clearly evident creativity you used. I've never seen any of your other work, but I can tell that your ...

I found this poem to be amazing. I liked how it's a love poem, but it doesn't have a happy ending, and it isn't the usual "we were always meant ...

Hey EmmVeePi! You requested a review, so here it is. I thought that this was a very well written piece. It seems to have very nice rhythm to it. And ...

I think that this was a very good poem. Although I'm not sure if you meant for it to be or not, I feel like you were commenting on the ...

This is a great piece. The flow of it is great. I feel, however, that maybe you could have included a bit more specific material. This poem could have been ...

I think that this was a great start to a piece, however it could use another look or two. In the beginning, I really loved the rhyme scheme. I think ...