lili024

I agree with Dumbuldore.

This was a good story, but, just like mine, your story goes too fast. You should describe what happens before they enter the field, while in the field, and once ...

Thank you guys so much!!!

Wow! It is pretty cool!

Thanks! I'm not done yet, but Thanks alot

You did a great job! Dogs said pretty much everything I had in mind, so take his advice! Everything dogs siad is true (even the a part about your avatar ...

Is it just me, or you are AMAZING in writing songs! I couldn't find any grammatical mistakes (I think...), so I'm only going to say KEEP IT UP! Send me ...

Great Job! You should definetly continue that, cause if you don't I'll cry. :'( You should make Thetis a bit more important. You also say I still remmember perfectly too ...

Muahahahahaha you are a genios ;) The forbbiden forest should be in capital letters. And its hermione not hermone Lili

You did a great Job. I almost cry when I saw Lily and James still alive. You should make Harry Neville's friend, like a Ron. I once thought of somthing ...

Thanks for the poem! You did a great job!

It is really good! I think its a great idea, but the not ryhming parts are a bit not good compared to the rest of the poem.You did a great ...

It is a good story! I can't believe Julia is the killer.She is the person I less suspected You are great keep it up!

It is a great poem! I think it is dream. I don't think to be or not to be is a great title for your poem but the rest is ...