leleparadise

Hello, hope all is well. Here is my review.

Ohhh I see, that honestly makes a lot of sense. Thank you for explaining this. No worries, any time

Hey, hope all is well. I thoroughly enjoyed this poem. The imagery you used to describe the setting is very nice. I can feel how hot the weather is. A ...

Thank you so much for the review. I appreciate your words. For the acute angle, I was hoping to describe the %u201Cgreater than%u201D sign %u201C%u201D I wasn't sure how to ...

Just a side note, I wrote this three years ago so forgive me for the dark tone.

Because of a misunderstanding, you throw the ultimatum to not read any more of someone's works? Really? How do you assume the most out of someone saying they can't reveal ...

I wish there was a love button for this poem. I love poems that are timeless and aren’t focused on just one single audience type. You worded this so beautifully ...

I have been working with beats. I just never record what I write lol But I am very glad you enjoyed it. And no worries on the cuss, no harm ...

Thank you so much. I%u2019m glad you enjoyed the read :)

BEAUTIFUL!! The delivery, the confusion, heart ache, the self doubt in ones own belief in getting better. The slow to then quick transition of believing the repetitive words of doubt ...

I actually really loved it. It's so simple yet tells a story. Reminds me of Pan!c At The Disco. Very nice. Kind of wish it was longer, as if you ...