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  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, General
    Re: Spectators

    Ohhh I see, that honestly makes a lot of sense. Thank you for explaining this. No worries, any time

    Jun 7, 2023

  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, General
    Re: Spectators

    Hey, hope all is well. I thoroughly enjoyed this poem. The imagery you used to describe the setting is very nice. I can feel how hot the weather is. A ...

    Jun 6, 2023

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: More

    Thank you so much for the review. I appreciate your words. For the acute angle, I was hoping to describe the %u201Cgreater than%u201D sign %u201C%u201D I wasn't sure how to ...

    Dec 16, 2021

  • Poetry » Satire, Humor
    Re: Math Problems

    Just a side note, I wrote this three years ago so forgive me for the dark tone.

    Feb 14, 2018

  • Poetry » General, Horror
    Re: Look -- That's Me!

    Because of a misunderstanding, you throw the ultimatum to not read any more of someone's works? Really? How do you assume the most out of someone saying they can't reveal ...

    Feb 12, 2018

  • Short Story » Romantic, Realistic
    Re: Regret

    Feb 12, 2018

  • Short Story » Romantic, Realistic
    Re: Regret

    Feb 12, 2018

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Morning

    I wish there was a love button for this poem. I love poems that are timeless and aren’t focused on just one single audience type. You worded this so beautifully ...

    Feb 12, 2018

  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical
    Re: Deep Thinking

    I have been working with beats. I just never record what I write lol But I am very glad you enjoyed it. And no worries on the cuss, no harm ...

    Feb 8, 2018

  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical
    Re: Deep Thinking

    Thank you so much. I%u2019m glad you enjoyed the read :)

    Feb 8, 2018

  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic
    Re: Again

    BEAUTIFUL!! The delivery, the confusion, heart ache, the self doubt in ones own belief in getting better. The slow to then quick transition of believing the repetitive words of doubt ...

    Feb 8, 2018

  • Poetry » Other, Lyrical
    Re: Two Realities

    Feb 8, 2018

  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic
    Re: Mr. Picture Perfect

    I actually really loved it. It's so simple yet tells a story. Reminds me of Pan!c At The Disco. Very nice. Kind of wish it was longer, as if you ...

    Feb 8, 2018


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— Immanuel Kant, Philosopher