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I love this, very side. One question how could a lie turn into deceit? Anyway, great piece full of emotion and all things that make poems good. Imagery, great wording, ...

Nice I like it!! For a poem that just popped into your head, its pretty good. keep on writing!!!

Very sad but very well written and very good also.

I loved this poem, greatly written and very good with the imagination. keep writing!!!!

I love this poem, it is full with emotion and very good imagery. I noticed little things but they were cleared up by the people that reviewed before me. Overall, ...

Very good. Is there more? I would love to read more. I really love the imagery, I can see it. Did you make up the names yourself??

I love the theme and idea of this poem. I also love the rhymes. I can't point out any grammar mistakes of something like that, in my eyes this was ...

Genius, I love it. I know its been done, but hasn't everything. Keep writing, this made me laugh with the lyric choices I am so liking.

I like this kind of imagery, short, to the point, and very very interesting title. Al in all I like the poem very well and everything I noticed has already ...

This.was.Awesome. Great idea and pretty funny, too!!!!

Everything I noticed was pretty much cleared up. Other than that you are really good at the soft touchy sorts of poems if that is what you were aiming for. ...

I love this poem!!! Good job, I am so liking!!!!!

I really like this poem and I can totally relate. But growing up is the best part in life. At least I think so.

I love these lyrics, very good and beautiful rhythm. I could just hear the song forming in my head. that's mostly because I want to be a songwriter.

Great job I really like this poem!!! Its very creepy at the thought of having a stalker.