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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Light and dark.

    What is this lyric poem about? I like it, though.

    Mar 8, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Daddy's Little Girl

    I like it.

    Mar 8, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Inspiration where'd you go? *Edited*

    I think that its good and I feel the same way sometimes. But it helps to imagine yourself in a state that you feel the most passionate about. Poem is ...

    Mar 8, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: All Dressed in Black -A Ballad

    So sad. I think it sad.

    Mar 8, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Me?

    I like the message it sends out. Keep writing.

    Mar 8, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Mirror, Mirror

    I love it. I read a similar poem in Teen Ink. It conveys a message of truth that us girls need to hear.

    Mar 8, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Don't You Love?

    I love it. So many are experiencing that today. I love it, the feeling and message that it has.

    Mar 8, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Face of Fear

    What is it about, bullying. I love it though, no matter the subject. You must have put real feeling into it. I like it, love it, and I feel you.

    Mar 8, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Three women and a blank page

    I like this poem. I can sort of hear the rhythm to it in my head and those are the best.

    Mar 8, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I am the Apple

    I like it. I think that you do good analogies.

    Mar 8, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: My Crush Ate My Homework

    I like the meaning it has. In the first part I was sort of lost. but I gathered the meaning.

    Mar 8, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Morgan's Lullaby

    I truly love it. You have a good sense of rhythm and rhyming. I love it, it sounds like a good lullaby.

    Mar 8, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Dear Diary.

    I love the sentimental feeling in this piece. Keep writing.

    Mar 8, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: First Love

    Truly I don't get the meaning. and for being Eighteen you should do better. Not judging but with a review you have to tell the solid truth. but other than ...

    Mar 8, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Is it because?

    I like it.

    Mar 4, 2011


If a dog will not come to you after having looked you in the face, you should go home and examine your conscience.
— Woodrow Wilson