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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Unpredictable.

    Hello, nice meeting you here. Seriously I had no idea you wrote this. I loved it, really. Good job on writing this. I like this because the message in it ...

    Mar 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: whimsy

    I loved it, and what more is there to say. i am speechless and this is my favorite type of poem. So good job

    Mar 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Wild Emotions - "Affectus Torva"

    I can't say the parts that I liked because I like them all, really. I think that you added lots of emotion into this piece and that, above all, is ...

    Mar 23, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: River

    I like this poem, it is good you can imagine yourself as something. I think if I had to imagine myself as something it would be the wind. Because who ...

    Mar 23, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: i am a rifle

    I liked this one and I can't say that I had a favorite line because I loved them all. I think that this is a really good poem. Very dramatic.

    Mar 22, 2011
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: The End

    I think that you did a good job writing this. It has a very sad atmosphere on it. I love it, though.

    Mar 22, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: why do i stay??

    I really love this. This is my favorite part: Beat me with your words, until your abhorrence can no longer be contained, A new black eye that needs to be ...

    Mar 22, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Nothing but Wind.

    I really like the way you wrote this. My favorite part is: There's more to you than they can see.

    Mar 22, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Pretty Girls Do Ugly Things

    I like this. I think that you did a good job. And I am about to go and read the first one. And you are so true about pretty girls ...

    Mar 21, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Insanity

    I really like this poem, it is really good. I like the feeling and emotion that you put into it.

    Mar 20, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Hypnotizing

    I like this poem and it certainly has a forceful air to it. I like the words and descriptions that you put into it. Keep writing

    Mar 18, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: deleted

    This is a poem I just had sitting around waiting around. So I want all of the reviews I can get. Don't be afraid to be harsh.

    Mar 18, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Perseverance Never Lies

    I love these lines. So look as you will, and take as you may. Just never forget, Tomorrow's a new day. Keep writing

    Mar 18, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: deleted

    This is about when you deny all you stand up for just to please other people.

    Mar 16, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Sanity vs. Love

    It was really catchy, like song lyrics. I liked it, actually. Good choice of wording and rhymes and rhythm. Because those are the biggest things when writing, and the hardest ...

    Mar 15, 2011


I will call them my people, which were not my people; and her beloved, which was not beloved.
— Romans 9:25