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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Unpredictable.

    Hello, nice meeting you here. Seriously I had no idea you wrote this. I loved it, really. Good job on writing this. I like this because the message in it ...

    Mar 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: whimsy

    I loved it, and what more is there to say. i am speechless and this is my favorite type of poem. So good job

    Mar 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Wild Emotions - "Affectus Torva"

    I can't say the parts that I liked because I like them all, really. I think that you added lots of emotion into this piece and that, above all, is ...

    Mar 23, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: River

    I like this poem, it is good you can imagine yourself as something. I think if I had to imagine myself as something it would be the wind. Because who ...

    Mar 23, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: i am a rifle

    I liked this one and I can't say that I had a favorite line because I loved them all. I think that this is a really good poem. Very dramatic.

    Mar 22, 2011
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: The End

    I think that you did a good job writing this. It has a very sad atmosphere on it. I love it, though.

    Mar 22, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: why do i stay??

    I really love this. This is my favorite part: Beat me with your words, until your abhorrence can no longer be contained, A new black eye that needs to be ...

    Mar 22, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Nothing but Wind.

    I really like the way you wrote this. My favorite part is: There's more to you than they can see.

    Mar 22, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Pretty Girls Do Ugly Things

    I like this. I think that you did a good job. And I am about to go and read the first one. And you are so true about pretty girls ...

    Mar 21, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Insanity

    I really like this poem, it is really good. I like the feeling and emotion that you put into it.

    Mar 20, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Hypnotizing

    I like this poem and it certainly has a forceful air to it. I like the words and descriptions that you put into it. Keep writing

    Mar 18, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: deleted

    This is a poem I just had sitting around waiting around. So I want all of the reviews I can get. Don't be afraid to be harsh.

    Mar 18, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Perseverance Never Lies

    I love these lines. So look as you will, and take as you may. Just never forget, Tomorrow's a new day. Keep writing

    Mar 18, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: deleted

    This is about when you deny all you stand up for just to please other people.

    Mar 16, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Sanity vs. Love

    It was really catchy, like song lyrics. I liked it, actually. Good choice of wording and rhymes and rhythm. Because those are the biggest things when writing, and the hardest ...

    Mar 15, 2011


"would you still love me if i was a worm" yeah babe i would AND id get you your own compost bin so we could enter gardening competitions together
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