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Re: Unpredictable.
Hello, nice meeting you here. Seriously I had no idea you wrote this. I loved it, really. Good job on writing this. I like this because the message in it ...
Mar 28, 2011 -
Re: whimsy
I loved it, and what more is there to say. i am speechless and this is my favorite type of poem. So good job
Mar 28, 2011 -
Re: Wild Emotions - "Affectus Torva"
I can't say the parts that I liked because I like them all, really. I think that you added lots of emotion into this piece and that, above all, is ...
Mar 23, 2011 -
Re: River
I like this poem, it is good you can imagine yourself as something. I think if I had to imagine myself as something it would be the wind. Because who ...
Mar 23, 2011 -
Re: i am a rifle
I liked this one and I can't say that I had a favorite line because I loved them all. I think that this is a really good poem. Very dramatic.
Mar 22, 2011 -
Re: The End
I think that you did a good job writing this. It has a very sad atmosphere on it. I love it, though.
Mar 22, 2011 -
Re: why do i stay??
I really love this. This is my favorite part: Beat me with your words, until your abhorrence can no longer be contained, A new black eye that needs to be ...
Mar 22, 2011 -
Re: Nothing but Wind.
I really like the way you wrote this. My favorite part is: There's more to you than they can see.
Mar 22, 2011 -
Re: Pretty Girls Do Ugly Things
I like this. I think that you did a good job. And I am about to go and read the first one. And you are so true about pretty girls ...
Mar 21, 2011 -
Re: Insanity
I really like this poem, it is really good. I like the feeling and emotion that you put into it.
Mar 20, 2011 -
Re: Hypnotizing
I like this poem and it certainly has a forceful air to it. I like the words and descriptions that you put into it. Keep writing
Mar 18, 2011 -
Re: deleted
This is a poem I just had sitting around waiting around. So I want all of the reviews I can get. Don't be afraid to be harsh.
Mar 18, 2011 -
Re: Perseverance Never Lies
I love these lines. So look as you will, and take as you may. Just never forget, Tomorrow's a new day. Keep writing
Mar 18, 2011 -
Re: deleted
This is about when you deny all you stand up for just to please other people.
Mar 16, 2011 -
Re: Sanity vs. Love
It was really catchy, like song lyrics. I liked it, actually. Good choice of wording and rhymes and rhythm. Because those are the biggest things when writing, and the hardest ...
Mar 15, 2011
