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I really liked this poem, good job :) I loved how you chose glass to represent a sort of emptiness in perfection, and how it is very fragile, easily shattered ...

I really like the image you portray in this poem. I think the river was a good choice to use for showing how the narrator is stuck/anchored while the "you" ...

Hi MrsxCreepypasta! I'm here for a quick review~ I really liked this story. You did a good job describing the frustration and confusion of the silent treatment the character is ...

Hey! I'm here for a quick review~ First of all, I loved this short story! It fully describes and shows the contempt between the two sisters, mainly by the expectations/comments/reminders ...

Hi! Here for a quick review~ I loved the ending of this poem, it really took me by surprise and made the rest of the poem make sense (in other ...

I really liked this poem : ) I like how you used the universe/outer space to describe grief, and how it is a "shapeshifter", something you both learn from and ...

Loved this poem! You use vivid imagery and fully immerse the reader in this storm in the forest. There are a few things I'd like to point out: -I would ...

Amazing poem! I've heard of the original Where I'm From poem by George Ella Lyon in my Creative Writing class (in which we had to write our own), but that ...