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  • Short Story » Dramatic, Horror Re: Trials of the Pride

    Hello!! You're welcome!! I really appreciate that you gave more information and insight in your reply!! when he speaks "as if this was some kind of game, not real life", ...

    Sep 25, 2025
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: NYLON - 5

    Hello!!! YW!! Oh yea i think I get what you mean. Description for description's sake is pointless, but on the other hand I think I need more description in general. ...

    Sep 25, 2025
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Pale Yellow

    you're welcome!! glad i was able to get that symbolism, especially from a good piece like this!

    Sep 22, 2025
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: The Cat Poem

    such a sweet, cute and short poem i love it!! i think we all should write more about our pets!! and that photo is just sooo cute.. your cat looks ...

    Sep 21, 2025
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: summer / fall

    unfortunately ive replied late to this sweet, lovely review but perhaps it's never too late to say: thank you!! so glad that even within the shortness, the imagery was strong ...

    Sep 21, 2025
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: summer / fall

    yesss im so glad you caught onto that sadness & grief here! also, thank you very much on the criticism on the brackets. its been a form of expression in ...

    Sep 21, 2025
  • Poetry » General, Narrative Re: my gel pen is out of ink.

    i acknowledge this poem is built from multiple things, but i just really wanted to specifically say i really like how the self-harm is mentioned here. while many people tend ...

    Sep 21, 2025
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: countdown. (tick tock.)

    aw you're welcome!! and honestly thank you for taking your time to give me more insight on this poem and you as an author! of course, you did express yourself ...

    Sep 21, 2025
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: summer / fall

    poem! biting at my legs is a long, long wind chilly: not what summer promised, during a morning where an orange-red leaf lies (on the ground, light-weight, not bearing any promises) i ...

    Sep 19, 2025
  • Poetry » Literature, Spiritual Re: The Genesis Poem

    "in your work", as in your work's html code btw!

    Sep 17, 2025
  • Poetry » Literature, Spiritual Re: The Genesis Poem

    Aw you're welcome!!! Ahh alright! Reading it now in its original form, I definitely love the flow of it even more!! Also, if you want to add spaces without doing ...

    Sep 17, 2025
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Mystery / Suspense Re: TIME. : chapters 1-3

    Aw you're very welcome ^^!! i'm glad! keep writing!!!

    Sep 15, 2025
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: NYLON - 4

    i will definitely eventually read more chapters, and also try looking out for any more that are published!! im really glad i was able to get the points of the ...

    Sep 15, 2025
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Why: A Poem-Raven's Perspective ToD

    AW YOU'RE VERY WELCOME ^^!!! of course i did, this is a great piece! ill consider trying to catch up with the novel! ALSO i'm really really glad you enjoyed ...

    Sep 14, 2025
  • Poetry » Other, Literature Re: The Dog Poem

    You're welcomeeee ^^!!! I'm glad I was able to get the poem, because of how beautiful this poem is. Ah, that makes sense! Thank you.. and you're welcome!!

    Sep 12, 2025


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