Softened thorns torn from a bush
Cover the honorary royalty
Fur is a four legged misty rain
Thinking mostly of his nobility
With silent whispers sitting at his ear
Unfinished airbrush thorns on his right hand
A dot will have caught his attention and he’ll go mad
In Dramatic Natural Ability, due to high demand 
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Okay once again a really simple poem, ones i really like. my favourite line is "fur is a four legged misty rain" because its just sooo creative and unseen. oh yes, and also the first line, "softened thorns torn from a bush" is also really nice because THE CREATIVITY IS OFF THE CHARTS??? the word play of "thorns" and "torn" itches my brain really well. "with silent whispers sitting at his ear" is something which reminded me of the fur inside a cats ears. it probably means something else, but this is what i thought of. also the line about the dot reminds me of when i went to my friends house (she has 2 cats, i have none because my mom hates cats
( ) and i had a laser pen which one of them loved SO MUCH i let my friend keep it. the line "due to high demand" added a humorous end? i love this poem.
YOUR CAT IS SO CUTE HOLY HELL TELL HIM/HER THEY'RE CUTE.
also the chemistry at the back lol. criss cross method? we might be the same grade.
Thank you, I'll let him know you find him cute. I'm very happy you liked the poem. The 'silent whispers' was meant to reference their really good hearing but I also really like your take on it being the fur in their ears. I'm doing crash higher chemistry so I'm taking a look at n5 stuff. He decided to sit on all the books I was using to study. Classic cat.
AWH your kitty is adorable! This poem is so cute, I also have a cat, and it reminded me a lot of her. Her name is Bambi and she's three!
The poem itself was really adorable, it felt like a cat wrote it itself. I can see cats referring to themselves as nobility and and royalty (I love that rhyme scheme) so naturally lol.
Cats are the best
Thanks! Cats are the best, Bambi is a really cute name for a cat! I'm glad you liked the poem!
NO WAY. NO WAY NO WAY NO WAY!!!! OMG UR CAT IS SO FREAKIJG CUTE. it's CATS here to leave a short review for this adorable cat. Tell him I love him 🤩
I like the syllable pattern it really flows along smoothly.
Maybe right hand should be right paw? I mean, cats are people too but maybe it would fit better. That's just my opinion.
The cat picture is so adorable and funny! He seems like such a sweet pet!
Overall this is my favorite poem you've ever made and this makes my day, continue with this type!
HAPPY EVERYTHING!!!
Love,
CATS
Thank you, I'm very happy you liked the poem and I'll be sure to let him know that you love him.
Yay! I loved it %uD83D%uDE01
Hi! Your cat is so cute! And the poem was brilliant too! The metaphors you used were so cool. I wish I had a cat, but I'm not allowed one yet
This poem is short and sweet, and accurately sums up cats and the fluffy little menaces they are. This is a beautiful poem, and your cat is really adorable. I don't really have anything else to say other than great job, and keep up your amazing work!
Hi! Your cat is so cute! And the poem was brilliant too! The metaphors you used were so cool. I wish I had a cat, but I'm not allowed one yet
This poem is short and sweet, and accurately sums up cats and the fluffy little menaces they are. This is a beautiful poem, and your cat is really adorable. I don't really have anything else to say other than great job, and keep up your amazing work!
Thank you! I'm really glad you liked the poem!
cutest cat i've seen in a while
Thank you, it helps him get away with things
such a sweet, cute and short poem i love it!! i think we all should write more about our pets!! and that photo is just sooo cute.. your cat looks so energetic & mischievous!!!
Thank you! He is.