ladyworkz

this poem has a sophisticated tone. it is surreal and feels like it is a piece from a novel...which is a compliment just to let you know. it entails of ...

I'll jump right into this. This poem was as powerful as it was simple. In the few lines you wrote you said quite a mouthful. you put new meaning to ...

Mandorelute, you have written a very interesting poem. The imagery you show creates a pleasently uncomfortable tone. I squirmed in my seat as i read this, yet could not bring ...

This is the poem of a first love. A first love can seem like the only one. You grow and you change yet that person remains and you are constantly ...

What an amazing warning this poem has to the young and hopeful and naive. Throughout your words there is Beautiful imagery. It comes off as sophisticated and protective. Scenes played ...

I enjoy reading your poetry. I find your work to be a dark delight. This poem seems to be on a lighter note compared to your other work and although ...

this poem is brutally honest. it makes the reader feel ashamed and guilty for not being able to help this narrator. it makes the reader want to call/text there friends ...

Holly Magin seemed like she was a really good cousin. The descriptions and small memories in the poem make the reader want to learn more of the "falling out" between ...

This poem is sweet and bubbly. It reads innocently and can make you feel like a young child. What is funny is that you never say what it is that's ...

First of all this poem was easy to read. Easier to read then it was to follow. Although the poem leads the reader through a serious story with much potential, ...

"what news is worse then that of death" Brilliant line. There is much potential in your words and in the way you write. there is just one thing i can't ...

First of all favorite line is the twist on rhyme or reason. Delightful...simply delightful. I personally loved this poem and believe that all writers who believe in what they are ...