kymorhens

This is a really interesting story and I am definitely interested in reading more. I noticed only a few grammatical errors, mainly with "their, there, they're". Pasting this into a ...

This is a story with emotion. I really love a story that makes that emotion feel realalistic. I almost cried reading this. I was hooked and couldn't stop. You really ...

This is really interesting. It really makes you curious about who these people are and what is the story behind who they are. It's something that could be turned into ...

This is a really good poem, which a very nice rhythm. Instead of nit-picking and explaining, I just wrote in the changes that I thought would improve the poem. You ...

Riveting once again. I really love how well you worked out the dialogue. It's very well thought out and your maincharacter obviously knows a lot about what he's talking about, ...

I really do love this poem. I, too, live in a dream world to escape reality, so I like how this poem describes it. The only changes I would make ...

This... is... riveting. Let me just say that your dialouge and descriptions are amazing. As an author, I struggle a lot with both of those attributes, but the way that ...

The theme of this is amazing. It captures what I've felt before so perfectly...I'd almost believe if someone told me I wrote it myself. Instead of breaking it down like ...

This has potential. It certainly has all the elements of a good story. But... there are a few things that might need some work. 1. Starting off a story with ...

I'll start off by saying that this is really powerful writing. I feel the emotions that the speaker is conveying very clearly. It makes me feel like i should do ...

You are off to an amazing start with this book. I really enjoyed reading it, because the character was developed well at the beginning, so I really got to know ...

I know the feeling of being in the ocean and this would definitely describe my experience. While it is true that this is not a traditional haiku, it follows the ...

Wow. This is a very moving poem that speaks an important and realistic truth. Many people can't see this side of relationships that tends to be thrown aside in a ...

This is very exciting way to tell a very simple story. At first I was confused what was going on, but I think that is the way its supposed to ...

Wow. This is a very strong poem that greatly represents the holiday known by two names: Valentine's day or Single Awareness day. I think it very well exemplifies how people ...