kutestuff003

yeah I'm not all that good of a poet to many of the people on here...but I try

That's what it is..she is saying you promised me you wouldn't but he does anyways..and hes hurt because he did it..and she turns away to leave and then he asks ...

What do you mean right?

Aww was a quick write and it was something totally different then what I write

Wow, I liked it, It was really deep, it got me thinking!

I have been working at my poems and am in the middle of working on one, thanks for the compliment on how I am inproving that is always nice to ...

thanks for the advice, when I have a few spare minutes, outside of my hectic life, I will take into consideration about what you said and change it! thanks so ...

I liked this one, because it was all true, I have a friend who is like that, her name is Elizabeth, she is always citisizing others besides herself. But besides ...

This is one I haven't seen before, You normally don't rhyme in poems but, then again..I would rate this a 3 1/2 out of 5... :) ---------- Kait

This amazes me...

Nice poem Liz....you have the skills to be a good writer...which is one thing I don't quite have but I am about to leave to head home to Minnesota so ...

Ok..I just need to say a few more things and then I will be done. Ok you are one year older than me so you don't have every little skill ...

I don't care wether you like it or not....I wrote it because all of this is true I may sound like a 2 year old but when it comes to ...

Wow Alex....Let me know what it tasted like...cause I know you tried it

I 4th that weird/odd structure...though very enjoying...cause you have to read it really slowly or more than once to get what you are really saying.