kris

Thank you for your kind review. Though I am certain that there must be something[i] wrong with it. Please, anymore critique?

Thank you very much Claeren :D

Come on guys, any help? :P

Hey guys, I've made most of the corrections that you suggested. :D Thanks a million. I've also posted the rest of the chapter, so if you would like to read ...

Hi guys. Thanks for the critiques, I really appreciate them. However, the commas are intended to be there. I placed them where I did as poetic devices. I wanted the ...

Ty Angel ^^ you do dote on my ego so *blushes*.

Can anyone else shed some light on how else I might improve this poem? I'd really appreciate the advice. Love Kris x

Ty :D Anyone else willing to offer some opinion on my poem? x

Hey... Can anyody help? :/

Lol! Don't be sorry, it really isn't important what I or anyone else on this site (for that matter) thinks about your poetry. You are the only one who can ...

Come on guys :P any help on offer? x

Can nobody help me out? :/

Thank you, so very much for the wonderful critiques everyone. You've all been so kind about this poem, I really feel touched that you like it so much. If you ...

This is in the completely wrong section, love. It needs to be in forum 14 ( ) Love Kris

I knew it was an extract from R&J...Oh yeah! I'm that good. :P Lovles