I felt like the poem started out really great. It caught my attention and the title really stood out and made me think about what it could possibly be about, yet, it had a hint of romance in it.
However, the punctuation makes it a little cluttered, and almost doesnt need to be there.
The poem ended a little weak, with the last few versus, but I really like the idea you have in the picture
The line mentioning tears in the sky was really powerful, I really liked it
Anywho, great idea!
Points: 890
Reviews: 4
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