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Ask Why

by Cobweb


http://e3band.com/stream/askwhy.htm


Ask why

So sick of burnt fingers and knots in the string
The one time it made sense it was only a dream
Rock can’t bleed but it can break
So before you jump for heavens sake
Please think twice

Chorus:
When we ask them a question
Do they tell us the truth.
Or do they just tell us what they want us to hear.
Buried so deep say it’s for the best
Things long forgotten, forever laid to rest
Don’t ask why.


Say this world’s falling down
And no one knows why.
May we live in the shadow of beauty and peace
But till then may choirs of rock angels
Sing you to sleep

Repeat Chorus

Chorus (last time)
When we ask them a question
Do they tell us the truth.
Or do they just tell us what they want us to hear.
Buried so deep say it’s for the best
Things long forgotten, forever laid to rest
Don’t ask why.
Please think twice.


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Tue Sep 09, 2008 11:10 pm
Cobweb says...



Thank you. Your opinion does count. If you’re listening to the music, it’s on par with anyone else's.

I’m very glad you like it. It’s one of my favorite songs (by me). It means a lot. When you’re famous, write me and we’ll work something out. :P




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Tue Sep 09, 2008 8:57 pm
BrokenSoul says...



okay i am younger than everyone here that has replied and i know my reply wont really count
but i dont care because this song is AWESOME! If i ever become famous (odds are one out of a million
so there is still a chance) Can i have this song on my first album? I dont like the gooey songs
i like the songs that get messages through the stubornest out of stuborn people which means
it has to be really good and THIS SONG IS THAT GOOD! well not as deep as the songs i really like but
it makes you stop and think for a little while!So good job! Keep up the good work! :D Be happy




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Tue Sep 09, 2008 8:53 pm
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okay i am younger than everyone here that has replied and i know my reply wont really count
but i dont care because this song is AWESOME! If i ever become famous (odds are one out of a million
so there is still a chance) Can i have this song on my first album? I dont like the gooey songs
i like the songs that get messages through the stubornest out of stuborn people which means
it has to be really good and THIS SONG IS THAT GOOD! well not as deep as the songs i really like but
it makes you stop and think for a little while!So good job! Keep up the good work! :D Be happy




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Sun Aug 31, 2008 7:13 pm
Cobweb says...



kris wrote:This is in the completely wrong section, love.
It needs to be in forum 14 ( forum41.html )

Love
Kris



Thanks, love.:smt090


Many apologies, to the Mods.




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Sun Aug 31, 2008 12:46 pm
Leja says...



*moved to lyrics*




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Sun Aug 31, 2008 8:44 am
kris says...



This is in the completely wrong section, love.
It needs to be in forum 14 ( forum41.html )

Love
Kris





The roots of education are bitter, but the fruit is sweet.
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