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I can relate to you on the matter of this story. I know what it's like to have father problems because I tend to have them with my estranged father. ...

Hello, this is Kman134 to review your work. Once I read this poem, it caused my sweet tooth to act up, but then it reminded me of cannibalism. It is ...

This poem fills me with heartbreak and sorrow. I can feel the darkness that has been put within this poem. It has some pretty good writing and details. Talking about ...

This is very aesthetic. You describe yourself in each beginning sentence as a beautiful rose, then as a blade and a thorn. The rose represents the beauty of one person, ...

Ah, poetry, such sweet poetry! This is perfect to read since there is some bad weather going down where I'm living. This is, also, very depressing as it shows some ...

This story reminds me of an episode of Star Trek: the Next Generation. Anyways, this is a very creative science fiction story. There aren't many that are imaginative in this ...

Friendship is an important thing as long as it is with the people you were truly close to and people like that would never understand the love that one person ...

This is a very interesting story. I can see how depressed your character, Matt, is after losing someone he loves and I can tell that he wishes that it was ...

Well, this poem is a bit short, but, from reading it, I can sense the realism you put into it. When I think of aptitude, I think of the talent ...

This is Kman134 and I'm here to tell you that this essay is great! I love anime and manga ever since I was a kid. I especially was a huge ...

Hello, SageNi! This is Kman134 here to review your work! Well, the beginning confused me, a little, because I couldn't tell what was going on, but as I red through, ...

A Love Letter: The first part of the story is interesting and made me think of a person's undying devotion of the one he'she loves. the symbolism seem a little ...

The vampire in this poem reminds me of Staz Charlie Blood from the anime/manga series, Bloodlad. I like how you express the vampires' love for manga, but you should look ...

After reading this poem, I could feel emotions I didn't know I possess. The use of sadness and excitement in every word you wrote down. The grammar wasn't so bad ...

Hey, Leo, this is Kman134 and I'm here to say that I like this story. I can see the use of realism and strong vocabulary in each sentence and paragraph. ...