klennon14

HA! XD This is great. This just made my day. I like "EVERYONE IS A RUSSIAN SPY!!!" and the last line. Awesome.

Thank you! I know the base is fairly strong- I just need to iron out my odd metaphors... I was trying to be unique with both the concept of the ...

Thank you for the review! I knew I was pushing it with the metaphors, and I am glad to hear a reader's input on them. I will take all of ...

Hi there, Lizzy. Wow, if this is a "quick" review, I'd like to see one of your thorough ones! All jokes aside, I really appreciate the feedback and I agree ...

Hi there! Thanks a lot for the review. I realize there are a lot of holes in this poem, and I did mention in the note above I am aware ...

Thank you so much for the thoughtful review. I will definitely take all of your advice into mind if I turn this into a short story or something of that ...

No problema, happy to help! :)

Thank you so much for the review! I completely agree with all the points you mention, and I will definitely follow the advice you've given me. I tend to veer ...

Thank you so much for the helpful review! I was definitely wrangling with the stanza you quoted, so I will need to clean that up. I agree with all of ...

(I don't mind being critiqued- that's what we do on here :)) Thank you so much for all of the support and the helpful suggestions! 2) The meaning of two ...

Thank you so much!

Your welcome, I'm glad I could help!

Thank you for the review and I will keep your opinion in mind! I was wondering if my stand-alone-line pattern was too much. The spacing between the stanzas was a ...

Thanks for the review! :)

Don't worry my grammar sucks sometimes too. ;)