klara1882

Not at all. Actually today I'm going to submit the last version of this story so I'd be glad if you'd check it out ;)

Thank you so much :)

Thanks for the help! :)

Hey Puck! Yeah, I do know it needs a lot of work, thanks! :)

Hey, thanks very much and nop, you did not screw it up! :P

I see what you mean, I was already told that it needs a plot. Thank you and I'll definitely work on it!

Thank you and yes, I see what I did wrong now xD

I'm so thankful for your reviews Puck! :) :) Thank you so much for mentioning 'for' I don't use properly (I was having some doubts with it xD) As for ...

You are very welcome! ;)

I'm glad I helped and you're welcome :)

One more thing - it says that this a script. I don't know if you have done it on purpose, but I thought you might want to know.

I have to say, this reminds me of Eminem.

Hello, this helped so much, actaully! I am so thankful for this review, I will jump right into working on this piece as soon as I find time for it.

I actually really like it a lot! Thank you, welcome to you, too! I knew story was not finished, but I thought it might be something when it is done. ...