kittycursed

Hey, Hop! good work! I like the way you introduce the poem as a hate-filled one, when really, as you reveal later, it's quite the opposite! I also like how ...

Hi! great poem! Noticing the small things is one of life's pleasures. You did very well with paragraph spacing, ensuring that each paragraph is even. you also do well with ...

Hey! great work! firstly, I love how surreal the whole work is. the dark, analytical style of speech, paired with the many metaphors make it very vivid, and leave much ...

Heyo, great work! firstly, the regret, looking back to what could have been done better, shows a lot of the story. the comparison to how light it used to be ...

heyooo, good writing! The adjectives you use are pretty creative, not ones i hear often. also, your writing style reminds me of authors like Edgar Allen Poe and Mindy McGinnis. ...

Hiya, great work! firstly, the words you use to describe child-like imagination in paragraph 2 are very vivid. you did very well painting a picture of an unimaginably large, colourful ...

Hi, great work! your story is very poetic, and very creative with metaphors. You also do a great job of showing the main character's emotions. how fearful he is of ...

Heyo, great work! First of all, the story is very intriguing. All of the little clues as to what might've happened, a death, a disappearing, skeletons and noises, portrays a ...

Great work! first of all, I haven't seen anyone using colours to represent feelings in their writing yet, so very creative! I also like how you use specific words to ...

Hey CATS, great work! unlike a lot of time when i see lyrics written out, I can clearly see the rhythm, and can imagine how each word fits in! you ...

heyo, another great chapter! knowing slightly the direction of this story, i think you introduce one of the main plots very smoothly. i also like the CATS! especially how well ...

heyy, great story so far! reading your first chapter, it was very interesting! I'm very intrigued with James' problem at the end of the chapter, and would also like to ...

great work! firstly, i like all of the metaphors in this story. how the stream stands for her regrets, which she watches, probably trying to find where she went wrong ...

heya! great poem! firstly, its very relatable. weighing the risk of pain with the gain of love, questioning whether they loved you at all, how completely opposite someone can make ...

hi, great work! you did well when writing Valencia's character, especially in comparison to jenny's, with Valencia sounding serious and proper, and Jenny sounding more bubbly and talkative. i also ...