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Hello there! I’m back for your second requested review. As the other poem you linked contains formatting (i.e. italics) I would encourage to use that same idea here, to distinguish ...

Hello there! Thanks for requesting a review. I’d like to preface this by saying how sorry I am for your loss. One piece of advice I would give you is ...

Hello there! Thanks for requesting a review. Alright, first off I see a lot of repetition, which is often occurring in various forms of poetry, especially as a way to ...

Hello there! Thank you for requesting a review, and I hope this helps. Judging from the categories, and from the first few lines I read, this closer to an "urban/real-life" ...

Hello there! Thanks for requesting a review, and I hope this helps. Mauve seems like an interesting character here, with how she seems a lot bit awkward and unsure of ...

Hello there! Thank you for requesting a review. I hope this helps. I think this is an interesting read, for sure. There's an aspect of this that geneartes a rather ...

Hello there! Thanks for requesting a review. ^^ To me, this reads as a definition poem, or even as an explaining/describing with examples. I think there's a lot of great ...

Hello there! Thank you for requesting a review. I hope this helps. Looking over this and the first chapter, I've got a couple of more general pieces of advice. First ...

Hello there! Thank you for the request in my review thread. I think this is a really interesting setup. I’ve looked through previous chapters a little, but I do find ...

Hello there! Thank you for requesting a review. I hope this helps. I think Terry is my favorite character in this, mostly because I feel most sympathetic for him. In ...

Hello there! I wanted to give a quick review on this chapter of yours and get it out of the Green Room. As a disclaimer, I have not read the ...

Hello there! Am I reviewing this to get the last two requirements for the Checklist Challenge? No of course not ;p I am here to nobly give you an, er, ...

Hello there! I wanted to give a quick review on this poem of yours. ^^ This review might not be the longest as this poem isn't the longest :p As ...

Ah, hello, hello, this crosses off two very important items on my checklist, so thank you for publishing this marvelous story. (Who would have thought that cowboys were the hardest ...

Hello there! I needed to find a script to read for the Checklist Challenge, and this one caught my attention because it was about the actual Grimm family, which was ...