kevin25a

This is chapter 5 it said it in the title. Didn't notice that Yukio mistake but I will fix it now.

Not sure how it double posted that but it's not the first bug that only started occurring today for me. I fixed all the typos, punctuation errors, and poorly worded ...

Yeah I only recently started to understand commas, someone helped me by pointing out and describing them simple enough. I already was six chapters in by then. I will go ...

Yeah I only recently started to understand commas, someone helped me by pointing out and describing them simple enough. I already was six chapters in by then. I will go ...

Thanks for the review, yeah all my stuff basically was typed on my phone's memopad widget. It doesn't fix anything, doesn't tell me any typos either. Not sure I know ...

Sam being a two way name was on purpose though I suppose it would bug a handful. Yeah as for Dillon, I had an info dump at the beginning I ...

That's a very detail lacking comment. Maybe you should say what you think needs editing. :D

Being agnostic means neither belief or disbelief. An agnostic person doesn't necessarily believe in a god, but believes it is possible they exist. It's a belief basically built on "seeing ...

It was pretty clear the way it's written. She tore up the novel because she thought it was an unrealistic goal and wanted him to move on. He also stated ...

It was pretty clear the way it's written. She tore up the novel because she thought it was an unrealistic goal and wanted him to move on. He also stated ...

Loved it. :)

I liked that line too. Huge dr who fan here.

Best chapter yet. Looking forward to the next chapters even more.

Still loving the story. :)

Thanks for the review.