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I sang all of this! These make great religious song lyrics. There are a few mistakes in wording (like "I've either..." where it should be "have either..."), grammar, and spacing, ...

A cultural commentary poem about personal façades, I see it. Our walls will all break down eventually. When the time comes, what will our inside-selves look like when we've been ...

Is there a conversation between two people between the gray bolded and regular fonts? Let's start with the beginning: "here is a memoir in scarlet paint. proceed with caution and ...

It's not romantic love! It's only romance! And it's a fleeting thing, too. Sigh. Oh well! ;) Romance, this feeling of excitement and mystery associated with a new love, the ...

What a wonderful idea. What you have here is a good skeleton to start another poem from, I think. If you would give this poem another look, I would suggest ...

Is the definition of "feminine" from a feminine perspective, that there is no definition? Is that the poem? You talk about feminists, anatomical attributes, appearance, and gender roles as if ...

I can't tell if this leaf is a metaphorical representation of a person. I thought, "Poem About Leaf," at first, but now I'm thinking, "Love Poem?" A leaf will, sure, ...

Home is where the heart is, and maybe that place you would say is beyond the Earth, but the land of Bangladesh is very much a part of the Earth, ...

It’s relatable, feeling overwhelmed by others’ expectations of yourself. You try your best to meet all of their expectations, but you never do enough. You’re over the edge, emotionally. Your ...

The length! It is long, for sure. You’ve chosen this rhyme scheme, and there are a few kinks in the rhythm that should be ironed out, first, I think, before ...

Soft, gentle, and smooth flowing from one memory to another: you wrap around from the start at Union Station to an end at Union Station. You may think you can't ...

Ooh! This was a long one and very melodrama. The very intense imagery and flourishes of prose make the story sort of murky, and I'll tell you how I've read ...

Red and green and gold tinsel or a mistletoe, lights on the house and reindeer hooves, wrapping paper all aglow in candlelight and - can you smell the gingersnaps? Including ...

"Judge me only as soon as I may judge you." This is a great message and certainly one that all of us need reminding once in awhile, but I've got ...

"the days will grow longer only after the lingering night." Your poem's end is very bright, and I like that growth: starting with the faint glow of a cigarette's tip, ...