keepitogether

This was really good, just a couple things i didnt understand how you transitioned from talkning normal amd then adding ye, and thee? and it wasnt in any other part ...

This was great, you had great emotin and very wonderful image. Keep writing :) Very relatable , i went through the same thing.

This was, really good and we are about the same age so it was relatable, i could learn from you i loved how you gave me imagery and created a ...

This was , breathtaking, Ive beein going through the same thing where you love someone who doesnt love you , its hard to let go. This was very detailed, maybe ...

This was well put together , and made me think about society. In English class we are talking about society and how it judged people based on bias. This was ...

This was amazing, and very detailed , i exspecially liked the part where you said Lift your head tip the bottle to see if it erases pain, but all you ...

This was really, good and i can relate. But one thing that people have told me was to work on building an image and tell how it felt to ignore ...

This , was beautiful, all the way down to the first verse to the last word, it had great imagery and beautiful ending, Im excited to read more of your ...

I enjoyed this, and im no expert but one thing i learned so far from other people on here is to basically create an image . When you say it ...

I love the way you started the poem Look in the mirror , tell me what do you see is it insecurity? I love that, because i can relate to ...