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Re: To Make A Violinist Sing (Part 1)
WOAH. MAKE THIS INTO A NOVEL PLEASE. JUST. DANG. WOW.
Apr 2, 2014 -
Re: Articulation
Such a cute poem! Hilarious. Loved it!
Apr 2, 2014 -
Re: Elementary (Chapter 1)
I LOVE IT. GREAT WORK!
Apr 2, 2014 -
Re: Balloons
I certainly agree with what your friends suggested! Keep writing! This topic is awesome!
Apr 2, 2014 -
Re: The Limitations of Life
loved it! your tone in this poem is magnificent and powerful! keep writing!
Apr 2, 2014 -
Re: Benches
short, but symbolic. loved it!
Apr 1, 2014 -
Re: Paired
perfectly stunning! loved it!
Apr 1, 2014 -
Re: Jukai (Sea of Trees)
This.. is one of the best poems I've ever seen on here. It's simply jaw-dropping.. I have no words for this.. This is just. Wow.
Apr 1, 2014 -
Re: Maturity
Just like the review below, I did also get confused at the second line. Perhaps "looked away" isn't the right word to use in this context. It just doesn't go ...
Mar 27, 2014 -
Re: Stars
sorry! my computer glitched
Mar 27, 2014 - Re: Stars Mar 27, 2014
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Re: Stars
Wonderful, wonderfully amazing poem! I see nothing wrong with it, and I have nothing to correct, except for that one word in the fourth stanza. Right in the beginning, you ...
Mar 27, 2014 -
Re: It's Been Far Too Long
BEAUTIFUL! I really liked it! Keep Writing! :)
Aug 20, 2012 -
Re: Coffee Stains
This is absolutely one of my favorites! I'm such a fan! I can relate to everything. Your metaphors and similes were absolutely stunning! Sometimes, vivid description can be too vivid, ...
Aug 20, 2012 -
Re: Anybody, but Me
I love this.
Apr 8, 2012